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When I love you
Contributed by
Brandyx7
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I love you
Flowers grow between
the pages of books
blood gushes from my heart
through brooks
I become liquid light
invisible to the eye
and the love in my heart
for you will never die
When I love you
I light the coming age
and stop time in your eyes
then become time outside all time
I wipe away the line that separates
time from this single moment
and feel that I am the Queen of time
When I love you
I conquer the world with words
a new language springs up
I conquer the mother of tongue
verbs, nouns, syntax
and the music of wine fills my cup
When I love you
Time preserves the custody
of my heart
and I cry from the fear
that our love is just a dream
That maybe the significance
of our intentions
is just an infatuation
at the edge of a dream
Copyright ©
Brandyx7
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2005-06-20 20:48:11]
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Re: When I love you
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:40:52 PM AEST
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Love is the greatest force in the universe.
Such is its power to bring wonderful dreams
or the most horriying pains.
Very good poem! Keep writing.
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Re: When I love you
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:29:20 AM AEST
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Incredibly beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: When I love you
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:54:15 PM AEST
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If this poem were a dream i'd want 2 stay asleep 4ever, i would anticipate nightfall so
as 2 have it reoccur night after lovely night . . .
Ben |
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Re: When I love you
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:45:31 PM AEST
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I read this twice.The first time I was so amazed by the eloquence of what you had written that I had to read it again to make sure I wasn't dreaming, lol.
Wonderful words......and a great subject to choose !!!
Steve |
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