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Piercing a Shattered Soul
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:04:58 PM in AEST
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Looking past my heart
You may see my shattered soul
Shattered for so long now and never to be mended
I hate the look you have in your eyes
That one that says I love you
Why would a simple I be loved by someone as great as you?
I only wish it could be mended
but there are so many missing pieces
So much has been stolen
So please dont say I love you.
It only breaks my heart
and when my heart is broken
the shards pierce my shattered soul
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Re: Piercing a Shattered Soul
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by Prisoner_of_Peace on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:29:06 PM AEST
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So sad, lets me see where you are speaking from... i just hope in time you can mend your shattered soul, and eventually replace those missing pieces.
Such a sad but beautiful piece.
I look forward to reading your next one...
G. |
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Re: Piercing a Shattered Soul
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:03:09 PM AEST
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How very sad that you're pushing someone away who wants to love you...This poem is nicely expressed, and hopefully this person will get your message before they fall any deeper.....
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Re: Piercing a Shattered Soul
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:58:55 AM AEST
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| Very sad and heartfelt... i'm glad you shared it and i do look forward to more of your writes. dw |
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