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Spent
Contributed by
harshreality
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 07:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Empty and Bitter....
And I'm the only one to blame.
The path that I've chosen;
The choices I've made,
All I can do is hang my head in shame.
I can't let go and I can't forget;
Cause I knew all along.....
I did it to myself-
And I don't think I'll ever get over this!
Stuck in a situation-
Where no-matter the outcome I lose.
Taunted by my selfishness;
Why is it only pain that my heart Pursues?
I can't change the past-
But I wouldn't even if I could;
And I'm falling apart,
Over something I knew would never last!
It makes no sense,
With me nothing ever does....
Everything has become distorted-
My heart; Ignorant to logic,
I cannot trust....
My mind cannot afford it.
Never again will I allow myself to care-
My faith in love has been spent.....
And the cost was much more than I could bare!
Copyright ©
harshreality
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2005-06-20 19:28:33]
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Re: Spent
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by Rikki on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 07:39:35 PM AEST
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This write is amazing!
I do this to myself as well, all the while knowing that I'm doing it.
Anyway, I know where you're coming from.
Well done, Rikki |
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Re: Spent
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:00:32 PM AEST
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I felt this way once, too.
Your exclamations really speak your soul in this work.
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Re: Spent
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 01:04:59 AM AEST
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I have to say we all get this feeling at one point of our lifes.
good write |
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Re: Spent
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST
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I FEEL spent after reading this..
dripping with emotion-
It's tough to love..again and again
peace to you-
B |
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Re: Spent
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by swiftsouljah on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:48:43 PM AEST
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"It makes no sense,
With me nothing ever does...."
I love those lines
good to see you posting again
Wayne
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