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But The Wind Was Stronger
Contributed by
justintears
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Remains the mourning which lenghtens the air
The euolgy spoken with ageless despair
Drowning the heart with false ridden tears
That bled with a kindness that hope never nears
Soothing, the feeling of tomorrow's disgrace
My dying emotions, to whom hope misplaced
Tighten the chains, for our love seems unmeant
The hours are sorrowed upon closer content
And fallen I have, broke wings now relieved
I've looked to a past I no longer believe
The path that's before me I pray is not longer
I've given my all, but the wind was far stronger
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2005-06-20 17:04:18]
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:18:42 PM AEST
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Great write, very rythmic.
"I've looked to a past I no longer believe"
That line just rings
Thanks for a pleasant read |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:22:21 PM AEST
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nice write. relatble and pretty
nat |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:24:29 PM AEST
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| I agree, relateable. Great write! |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by harshreality on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:04:37 PM AEST
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| I don't even know what to say.... This is so beautiful. Your very talented |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:53:16 PM AEST
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| very nice! it was well put together and so full of powerful rhyme and imagery! thanks much for sharing it. dw |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:26:12 PM AEST
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makes me want to lay down and cry.. :(
I maybe would've posted this under sad poetry
then I read it again..
and truth be told..I would've posted it under emotional as well..
an amazing write
B |
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Re: But The Wind Was Stronger
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:56:01 PM AEST
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If I had five thumbs all would be up.
I think I am WISHING I had written this one.
You shine brightly and you express something very quaint yet strong. If that makes sense.
Well done and then some..
Kie |
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