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Cold Bath
Contributed by
Boobiepeach
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:50:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bathe in the water used
Think of who you are
Reality smites but drifts away again
Feel the water wet with comments
Bad simulation of human emotion
Tear then laugh then shrug
The dust of life unused floats around you
Smell the dead skin in the liquid cold
Your lies are murky here
Wash regret
Your hair has been soaked with sin
Saddened by the temperature of growth
Wanting to splash all water out
But still and motionless sits an off course pathetic
Old soapy film covers hurting toes
While the rudeness seeps into the skin
Drops of certainty fall
From finger tips
Look for pity
As you lie in pulpy fiction
Moisten the face of true record
Hands have aged and ached
Surrounded in own fluid of self hate
Bath of no substance
Copyright ©
Boobiepeach
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2005-06-20 15:50:37]
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Re: Cold Bath
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by saved_by_the_x on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:54:20 PM AEST
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| love it will you got to my poem right below you it is called pain and will you comment on it |
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Re: Cold Bath
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:54:57 PM AEST
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| You rule!!!!! That was the best one yet!!!! I Love you peaches!! Boobie sucks!! I don't like him, I wanna punch him and his skinney freak HPV witch! |
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Re: Cold Bath
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:18:10 PM AEST
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| It was vivid and sustained, yes. However do you write slipknot's lyrics by any chance? |
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