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!!!!!PAIN!!!!
Contributed by
saved_by_the_x
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i wish i heard it more it is like a hurt deep inside but i don't listen to it, there is a girl in here own world trying to plot out life trying to look out ahead to a brighter life but there is a pain deep inside and lots of lies to cover up the the other ones done from the past like the burn marks they are not from a heater but a painful memoerie done apone to herself and the scars on her body not from a random fall but from one big lose of hope& love and all the curious calls to her friends not to tell them to bring something to school ,but to tell them her death trips and killing ways such as pins and needles she she is in pain from gulit PAIN PAIN PAIN she hates to tell her loving friends for the caution of pain and lost not lost of her friends but lost of faith in friends she has lost more than she has and less than she wants that is why she has not heard it more and that thing is LOVE.
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Re: !!!!!PAIN!!!!
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:14:53 PM AEST
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verry passionate, honest. i really liked....
"scars on her body not from a random fall but from one big lose of hope& love"
keep it up! good use of pain both seen and unseen.
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Re: !!!!!PAIN!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:25:55 PM AEST
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