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warped & twisted
Contributed by
serendity
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:05:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted
Deep inside im wraped &twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too much whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me wraped & twisted
Sleeping awake & chokeing on a dream
Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted
Lost in somone so wraped and twisted
On my knee, alivebut dead
Look at the invisible blood i've bled
I'm not gone, but my mind has drifted
Don't expect much, I'm wraped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted,empty & hollow
Todays just yesterday's tomorow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, wraped & twisted
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2005-06-20 15:05:13]
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Re: warped & twisted
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:07:32 PM AEST
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We all feel that way once ot twice in our lifes.
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Re: warped & twisted
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by Rikki on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:16:28 PM AEST
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I liked the lines,
"Burnt out, wasted, empty & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow"
I've felt that way before!
Good job!
Rikki |
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