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Untitled yet.. any suggestions?
Contributed by
undiscoveredshadow
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:46:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She sits in her room and cuts all night
But no one had a clue, everyone thought she was alright
No one knew what went on behind the closed door
They don't know how the girl wishes to live no more
They don't know how everyday people would tease her
And then how at night she'd come home and pull out that razor
She'd cut real deep
But no one has ever seen
Maybe it was cuz no one really cared
And that's why she feels like it'd be better if she wasn't there
Maybe she should just leave this world and say good-bye
Would anyone even notice if she would die?
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2005-06-20 11:46:45]
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Re: Untitled yet.. any suggestions?
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by ABySs on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:10:39 PM AEST
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you have a title right there
but ill just say it
Behind Clossed Doors
as for the Q at the end yea someone
would care
and one more thing we have to speak
if we want be heard an for others to know how we feel |
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Re: Untitled yet.. any suggestions?
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by Sherah on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:00:24 PM AEST
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| Behind Closed Doors... Thats what I would name this poem... Good writing, I hope you don't feel this way.... |
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