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So is this really Goodbye ?
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
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Why must I have to say goodbye
I dont want things as they seem
But things are changing now
As my life fades into a dream
Things have been strange sometimes
Sometimes as a person I am not good
If I could change my stupidness
And Turn back time then I would
Now I have become alone
But for you I still care
Hoping oneday in life
Again you will be there
I am hurting very much
To know I no longer have you
And if You need me please just say
I will help in everyway that I can do
But now we cant be together
And somehow I dont know why
See my face, my pain and torture
Its the last tears I will cry
When the day soon draws near
And you say you have to go
Will you know im hurting
If you miss me will I know
The time I have spent with you
Will this final story will end
I just wanna say to you
My love to you I will send
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lil_angel_eyes
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2003-01-06 14:00:00]
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Re: So is this really Goodbye ?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:07:09 PM AEST
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| "If you miss me will I know" - this line is really good cause sometimes we don't know someone misses us and maybe if we did know we might feel better but its the same for us too we may miss someone and they never know...but this was an emotional great write. |
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Re: So is this really Goodbye ?
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by chantel on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:20:39 PM AEST
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| while reading this i found myself thinking of my ex. this holds a lot of meaning and thought i really tink you did a good job. keep it up___ chantel |
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