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Here Without You
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:51:21 AM in AEST
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Is this love or just a game
Whenever I hear your name
My heart goes insane
I have vivid dreams
And I see your face
I get lost in the thoughts
That I find in this place
The night time is sweet
For my dreams come to play
They bring me your voice
And it says my sweet name
I have thoughts of you and me
Questions of will we ever be
But together forever we are
For in my heart your loves never fare
I have dreams in witch I see your face
For my heart feels so alone in this place
And I need the warmth of your embrace
To come hold me close and comfort my pain
So kiss my lips and tell me you care
Tell me these feelings are feelings we share
For near or fare or forever apart
My thoughts for you are always in my heart
Tell we meet again and I feel your embrace
My feelings for you remain alone in this place
~Steve~
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Re: Here Without You
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:35:51 PM AEST
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A lovely write true 2 form in feelings and emotions, well done . . .
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Re: Here Without You
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:53:16 PM AEST
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Oh wow---I can't even begin to tell you how much I can relate to this right now!!!! Stop invading my mind Steve!! lol j/k Well done; this is a wonderfully expressed poem.
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Re: Here Without You
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:38:35 PM AEST
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awsome job once again .Your poetry really move me .And not very many poets can write like that.
take care
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Re: Here Without You
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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| Again, you are amazing. That was a wonderfully romantic poem. You are a sweetheart, come home soon so you can be with the ones you obviously love deeply. |
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Re: Here Without You
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:21:50 PM AEST
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I love your poem Steve, It was excellent. I wish you wern't all that way away on your own though. Keep up the writing, you are fantastic.
You are in my thoughts,
regards, Tara
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Re: Here Without You
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 05:17:05 PM AEST
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very, very good! it's been awhilie since i've read your poems...and they're as strong as ever.
So heart felt and longing is the core of this poem that i can relate just as well.
thanks for sharing and take care Steve
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