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Lost But Never Gone
Contributed by
sride686
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Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:45:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A sensual love
Thoughts that torture my soul
A love that was lost
And left out in the cold
Once I was warm
With a love so true
Now the rains come down
As I dream of you
Winds of cold
That sting to my soul
Never to be stopped
For my heart is lost
Lost and rejected
Left out in the rain
Left here to suffer
Tell my life goes insane
Words of joy
I never speak
For my heart and my life
Has grown to week
What is happiness
For all I know is fear
Pain from a love
I only wish was here
Tears so cold
They turn to ice
If you felt this pain
You’d start to die
Touch my skin
And feel my death
As I start to rout
And descend into death
Quietly I speak
As my voice starts to fade
Over come by my death
And her life is to blame
Thoughts of her
As I start to fade
Now my life is over
And I welcome my grave
~Steve~
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sride686
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Re: Lost But Never Gone
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:26:29 PM AEST
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| i like it .....its sad and reminds me of someone ......compliments to thee |
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Re: Lost But Never Gone
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:39:54 PM AEST
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A deep abiding longing in this write sad but well expressed . . .
Ben |
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Re: Lost But Never Gone
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:58:20 PM AEST
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Well done yet again Steve. I could feel the 6th and 7th stanzas especially. Perfect ending too.
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Re: Lost But Never Gone
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:33:30 PM AEST
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wow beautiful yet sad my friend.
You put your emotion in words that is so awsome. |
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Re: Lost But Never Gone
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:20:03 AM AEST
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| I loved that one Steve. You are truly a romantic at heart. |
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