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Never be reincarnated
Contributed by
naijerana
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:27:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am lost
Lost in oblivion
I try to get out
But I cant
I am to weak
To do it
Then again
If always been the weakest
Maybe that is the reason
Why I am still here
Because I do not wish
To see the reality
For I am to weak to handle it
As I say this
I have already give up
I always give up
And does are 2 reasons for me
To not go in reincarnation
I am not worth it to walk
Upon the mortal world
Among the strong and giving uppers
Though I am not the only one
It feels like I am
Maybe because I
Do not belief in me self
Or it is just because faith
Says it so
Though I do not know
If they have the same effect
In oblivion
Though I my self say I will
Never be reincarnated
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Re: Never be reincarnated
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:50:05 AM AEST
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Your words were mixed up a lot the "does" i think is supposed to be "those" and many other places had this problem. It took away from the poem and made me feel less like finishing it. Overall good concept...
Keep writing,
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Re: Never be reincarnated
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by justmeallicanbe on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:51:37 AM AEST
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| You may need to proof read before you post. Some of the words are misspelled or in the wrong context. Otherwise, the poem is very deep and morbid. If this is written from the heart I do hope you find self-worth soon. We all need it from time to time. H |
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