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Your Dead to me.
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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My sister calls you up
and you tell her all these lies.
Its been seven years
and still the pain is stabbing my inside.
You say youve always loved me;
from the day Id been born
till the day you die.
If only I could believe it
I might live a different life.
How am I supposed to say "I love you"
when you havent been here by my side?
You didnt help me up
every time I fell and cried.
You could have shown you loved me
I could have been in your life.
You could have quit the drugs
and be standing at my side.
I dont need you in my life,
not since I was at the age of four.
I dont need you here today
I have a father to call mine.
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Re: Your Dead to me.
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:46:48 PM AEST
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Good structure and its really sad yet still very hopeful at the end, Nice job,
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Re: Your Dead to me.
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by JustAGirl001 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:36:27 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Very strong emotion and anger throughout. |
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Re: Your Dead to me.
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:32:34 PM AEST
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I feel ya..
I was also..
young tho-
great hate
you desreved and got much better
B |
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Re: Your Dead to me.
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 03:53:19 PM AEST
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Nice job. I really liked it. I could really feel your emotions in it. I'm sorry for you. This makes me realize just how much I have. Best wishes to you and nice write!
-Drapes |
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