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Cold Water, Warm Suttle Gestures

Contributed by Exodus on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The water shines beside you
And you're foolish with pride
A smile between us can't awake you
And deep inside I know you died

The more you see me truly
The side best taken with wine
I can see a happy ending
Where both our lives with intertwine

I know I can't be near you
But I accept this fate
The more the light shines in me
I hate for these lives to separate

The water pours all in you
It's cold and it heals the pain
I choke on all our anger
For that I am ashamed

A letter I wrote to you
To tear it up you must decide
I see both ways beneath you
To fall you must let go of your pride

The walls are cold without you
And inside I want to escape
I wish I could see you
But its so dark behind the drapes

This water will remind me of you
I know where I will find myself
I think of it often
And I think of no one else

Copyright © Exodus ... [ 2005-06-19 23:04:18]
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Re: Cold Water, Warm Suttle Gestures (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:44:19 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem, wonderful title and emotionally charged. Very well done!

Laurie

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