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Untitled
Contributed by
XXLet_Love_DieXX
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:28:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So here we are preserved in my mind forever.
Looking into your eyes,
time stops around us.
All I see is our hearts together.
Forever do I wish to be yours.
But I have this feeling of longing,
And yet a feeling of hate.
I've already tried to be yours,
Already tried this love.
But surely if you love me still,
I'll gladly take you back.
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2005-06-19 22:28:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:39:00 PM AEST (User
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Your poem shows hurt yet longing for someone,but if that someone treats you bad--dump him-- as it usually gets worse once he thinks he owns you.
I think you could have rymed a little more tho.
Keep writing
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