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The 50 Minute Hour
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The monotonous routine
Perpetuates the circular resistance
In the passing of the hours
You shall come to see how
The pollen sometimes,
Kills the bee
And his lover, the sunflower
How the carnivore chews and grinds
And obsessively,
Never fully devours
The flesh and bone
The ten minutes lost
In a dimension across
The fifty minute hour
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Re: The 50 Minute Hour
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:43:33 PM AEST
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This is good! A creative mind indeed Jyss....! Always so grim though....lol
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Re: The 50 Minute Hour
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:47:46 PM AEST
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grim for sure..
a bodeful write
crisp and unique
as only you can..
I love it..
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