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The Laughter
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:33:15 PM in AEST
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I hear the laughter
As I fall after
Losing the strife
After destroying my life
I hear the laughing
I begin screaming
Laughter to my left
Causing me this stress
Laughter in front and at my back
Pushing me off track
Laughter to my right
Always at my side
I begin to scream
Wishing it all a dream
But whenever I fail
Laughter is right on my trail
Laughing at me, mocking me
Laughter is now an enemy
Always following
Always laughing
I begin to run
I feel shunned
When I fall down
I frown
All others laugh
Of my stress
And pain
Laugh as I drain
I scream and yell
As I fall
But with all the laughing
No one hears the screaming
I’m drowning
I’m not laughing
Everyone else is though,
Leaving me feeling cold
I losing the strife
They are draining my life
With the laughter
Always after
I fall and trip
I’m starting to slip
But no one hears me crying
Not with all the laughing
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Re: The Laughter
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:39:03 PM AEST
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Very haunting poem...sent shivers up my spine.
Yes sometimes this world can be filled with mockery and disregard, you cant help feeling people are laughing about you sometimes.
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Re: The Laughter
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by foxfire44 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:56:34 PM AEST
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| laughter can be fun and healing at times it can also destory a gentle soul and not even no it they say that a tong is sharper then words....well laughter can be just as sharp ....not bad ....keep up the good work |
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Re: The Laughter
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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A dark poem..entitled.."The Laughter"
just that is magnificent-
as I read it..I could only be reminded
of those old Vincent Price horror movies
in which his own evil laughs are voiced over
the most terrifying scenes..
louder..LOUDER.. LAUGHING
beautiful, dark saddness
great write..
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Re: The Laughter
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:13:22 PM AEST
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wow. i understand where your coming from. good write. good words. i think i feel the same way a lot of the time. just when you think you have a grasp on things the laughter from others comes into play.
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Re: The Laughter
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:39:26 PM AEST
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| Wow that was great. I think we've all been there. Great words. I loved that one. |
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Re: The Laughter
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by budge on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:37:35 AM AEST
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| well set out with agood use of the language well done !!! keep it up!!! |
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