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This Teenage Angst
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:32:36 PM in AEST
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My only aim in this life is to quickly meet its end
Consumed by this depression that’s become my only trend
Suicidal thoughts that sneak into this filthy brain
I’m not cut out for life for its saturated with so much pain
Just so tired of living and I think I’m burning out
Obliterating into nothing, filled with such self doubt
I know when you are young, you are meant to
Savour the moment, without a care, living free
Well honestly I don’t know how I got this way
But it’s sure no happy way to be
I think of leaving this all
I swear my days are getting short
Because I’ve turned into someone
Something I never thought.
Inside there lays an empty heart
Not enthused
Or impressed
Overcome by thoughts of angst
Confused
And real depressed
~These are meant to be the best days of my life~
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-06-19 21:32:36]
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Re: This Teenage Angst
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:06:05 PM AEST
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Very painfull write, I'm sure.
Jus maybe the best is yet to come but ya gotta wont it.
Keep writing 'cause u r a very good writer.
huggs, prayer, luv,
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Re: This Teenage Angst
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:11:06 PM AEST
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well first I just want to say that I love the style and composition of your write..
the content is a bit frightening-
just try to live in the moment
try not to worry about things
you cant controll..
and above all..keep writing it all
If this doen't work for ya..no worries-
life's short..
peace be with you friend
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Re: This Teenage Angst
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:09:43 AM AEST
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Ahhh yes...thanks for the flashbacks ; ) I love this emotionally charged write. The style is laid out well, and the 'teenage angst' is fully felt...Hang in there. Contrary to that whole 'best days of your life' bull, the teen years are among the worst!!! It'll get a lot better...Give it time. Take Care.
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Re: This Teenage Angst
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by xXcrossedXx on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:58:18 PM AEST
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Very nice write I especially like your ending.
Keep it up,
--amanda--
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Re: This Teenage Angst
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by Whoknows on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:40:28 AM AEST
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Wow, this is the 4th poem I have read of yours and they are all amazing. Keep up all the good writes!
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