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She...
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:31:21 PM in AEST
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She’s so beautiful,
She’s so lucky,
She’s so fake,
And superficial.
She’s so popular,
Everyone loves her,
She’s not sure though,
She’s losing ground.
She’s so fragile,
She’s so graceful,
She’s so good,
At tricking people.
When she smiles,
All the while,
In her heart,
It’s upside down.
So when you see her,
Don’t believe her.
She’s not feeling,
What she shows.
There’s another side
To this perfect girl,
Of which,
Nobody knows.
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2005-06-19 18:31:21]
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Re: She...
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:47:25 PM AEST
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| simple and thoughtful. I think you made a good point here and your poem is well written. good job. |
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Re: She...
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by c2b6s on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:52:35 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem...its simple but touching and i know exactly how the person in your poem feels |
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Re: She...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:15:21 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking message.
-Not all is as it seems-
Well done, use of simple terms but a powerful write. |
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Re: She...
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:50:18 PM AEST
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Karis this is OUTSTANDING! your best piece yet!! Hold on to this and really be proud... this was phenominal!! I often try to write pieces like this and lately I've really been interested by this topic but you have outdone anything I would write about it, this is definately my favorite.
Great write! No critiques, just praise.
Your cousin,
Amanda (lol) |
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Re: She...
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:13:59 PM AEST
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hey karis, this is megan btw
thankyou so much |
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