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Untill our next dance

Contributed by kayden on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:12:45 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



Walking through the woods
And a leaf falls from the sky
I look up and i see
A lovely butterfly

I reach down to get my net
To catch your lovely scent
My net i do swing
So gently so i dont break your wings

When i woke up today
I went to see how you were
You had withered all away
Only pieces of what you were before

I'm sorry for what i did
I didnt mean to do you harm
Everytime i see what i want
I pin it down and take a chance
Then it filters all away
Then it leaves all away
Untill our next dance

I will never forget you
I'll remember you for you
Seeing all that you have done
An everlasting impression

For we will meet again
When life has fallen
I will no longer take a chance
We will have our next dance

For i will see you again
Better than you were before
Now life won't ever end
What now do we have in store.




Copyright © kayden ... [ 2005-06-19 18:12:45]
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Re: Untill our next dance (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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well i think the leaf turning into a butterfly symbolizes that things arent what they seem. i think the overall point was that you kept it o locked up it died, im guessing a love or something? but that you know oyu'll have another chance and you'll wait for it? i think it was well written and interesting. you did a great job. keep up the great work.


Re: Untill our next dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Addelyn on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:40:52 PM AEST
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What a change from your other writings. Strong emotion, very good. Keep it up!


Re: Untill our next dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 12:24:21 AM AEST
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neat poem


Re: Untill our next dance (User Rating: 1 )
by hearts4pain on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:15:11 AM AEST
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such amazing symbolizim

i love poems with hidden meanings.

cute poem tho. real cute.




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