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A Challenge
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
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O cruel fate, thou, the evil spider!
With sweet smiles of guile,
Weaving a palace of pearls and dreams
With thy silvery threads and false hopes,
Thou did invite me for a feast of luck.
Like a foolish fly entranced I was ensnared
And entangled in thy treacherous cobweb.
As I was shocked by the deceit of the world that
Appeared on thy face, and lost in a deep despair.
Thou art coming very fast to feast on my heart!
Aaah..Stop! Stop! Thou evil spider!
Don’t hiss and don’t shriek with a joy of victory!
I will never give a chance to suck my life breath.
You will not succeed, for my heart is burning
Like a sphere of fire that rises in the east,
And my mind blazing with the flames of willpower.
I shot forth now the flames of fire through my eyes,
Thou burn down, and be reduced to ashes !
So that I create a new fate for the dawn of new age!
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Dt: 6-1-2003
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Re: A Challenge
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:44:04 PM AEST
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| very thought provoking...will power is a very strong thing but sometimes we have to dig deep to find it ...thank you for sharing your wisdom. |
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Re: A Challenge
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:20:32 PM AEST
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fate fetter's confusion proved
to heart along quoth words of truth,
your epicurean lines of fate
hath speed the mind non too late,
a true poet in like and kind,
therefore knowest ever
beholding live by your day,
treasuring my time in
your lovely endless rhyme.
Devotedly your friend,
huggs, always Nessa |
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Re: A Challenge
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:06:44 AM AEST
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This one pulled me in and wouldnt allow me to stop reading it till the end.....it's very captivating my friend, it's challenging to read and very thought provoking....it's an exciting read...thanks for sharing this one....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: A Challenge
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:51:35 PM AEST
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| the heart and mind are the strongest part of man,,it has something that nothing can stop,,LOVE ,,,,spooky |
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Re: A Challenge
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:05:40 PM AEST
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| Yes a very strong write indeed....i guess all it takes is willpower.....thanks for the read.....take care...........tanya.............:-) |
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Re: A Challenge
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by nomad on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 05:42:04 PM AEST
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| An excellent depiction of evil, Venkat. Yes, a spider, and yes, I have been faced with this challenge. Will power and faith can triumph. |
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Re: A Challenge
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by karoody on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:21:00 AM AEST
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| you truly have that fire in your soul, i see it in your work...you have such a way with words... |
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Re: A Challenge
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:53:30 AM AEST
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| Wowie Venkat. This is wonderful. I have been through many a challenges in my lifetime. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: A Challenge
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:53:51 AM AEST
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Talk about the will of the spirit!!?!! WOW!! Nice way of looking at it. Never thought of it quite that way before. :o] I'm going to remember this next time I have a personal challenge to face (which will be in a couple of minutes, I suppose LOL) I honestly think that seeing a challenge as a spider to squash will help me to visualize and defeat my demons! Needless to say I loved this.
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Re: A Challenge
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:53:04 PM AEST
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| purely amazing masterpiece. nothing can compare. |
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