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Plight Of My Finaly Goodbye
Contributed by
HoPeFuLtKn
on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:28:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting on clouds in the distance,
A butterfly puts up the slightest resistance.
Remembering the once upon a time,
Everything fitting, everything in rhyme.
Then the butterflies erotic flight,
Leaving the place and all of the light.
Reality snaps with a wild tomorrow,
I come back and remember all of the sorrow.
When the sun finally sets,
Happy life to me, is just bets.
I know I'm not the best,
Why must I always be put to this test?
The test of death or life,
Coming with pride--leaving with a knife.
The decision to say or go,
Sometimes I just don't know.
I really don't want to be,
Anything other than ordinary me.
So stop trying to change it,
I can't take another fit.
Leave me along in my room,
Sentencing me, to a fate of doom.
I'll watch everyone pass me by,
Time seems to suddenly fly.
The moonlight on my cheeks,
From my wrist, crimson flow leeks.
Remember me and my fate,
You won't be sorry that your too late.
I'll be happy to not pretend,
For my sake try to comprehend.
No worries, I'm just another lie,
This is the plight of my finaly goodbye.
Copyright ©
HoPeFuLtKn
... [
2005-06-19 16:28:23]
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Re: Plight Of My Finaly Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:42:55 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very powerful write. I like how you made this flow. I feel the exactly same way you do. |
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Re: Plight Of My Finaly Goodbye
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 09:53:50 AM AEST
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Very melancholy, it left me feeling- and that’s always a good thing. Keep up the good work.
Laurie |
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