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you
Contributed by
dena
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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ever since i have met you
you take my breath away
all the love you give me
all the stuff you say
my vision of the perfect guy
is not what i thought
your what i vision as the perfect guy
it didnt matter that u are hot.
You do a lot of things
i keep loving you
the things i used to hate
i learn to accept them too
i love you with all my heart
scary to now think
i knew that right from the start.
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dena
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2005-06-19 15:56:32]
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Re: you
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by Sherah on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:48:14 PM AEST
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Good Poem !! Just needs alittle help at the end. You seem to be missing a line....
I knew it from the start ,
It's Scary to now know
I love you with all my heart,
I have found my hero. |
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Re: you
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by c2b6s on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:50:43 PM AEST
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| cute poem |
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