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Sweetie Land
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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In a forest, dark and deep
Sits a cottage, fast asleep
Made of toffee, all things good
Tucked inside a magic wood
Walls are made of gingerbread
Held together with chocolate spread
Chimney made of ginger snap
By it sits a liquorice cat
Toadstool chairs of coconut
Soft spun sugar underfoot
Tables made of apple pie
Underneath marshmallow sky
Clouds are made of candy floss
Drinking water, lemon squash
What a sticky day today
Sweetie land, hurray, hurray
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2005-06-19 14:41:28]
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Re: Sweetie Land
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:48:48 PM AEST
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Wow u brought the child out in me u ought to be writting 4 disney, very touching in a tearful way, oh 2 b able 2 go back 2 child hood . . .
Ben |
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Re: Sweetie Land
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by foxfire44 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:03:53 PM AEST
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| that is a very cute poem you did a very good job ....makes you want to go eat it....(smile) |
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Re: Sweetie Land
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by RavenEnsued on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 10:02:47 PM AEST
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| very SWEET poem. actually made me smile.....wish i was a kid again. good job! lol |
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