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walking through
Contributed by
wizard
on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:40:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This crumbled earth on which I walk
Each step with apprehension
Accepting every challenge,
Accepting all the tension
Marching alone into nothingness
Expansive ruins to the horizon
Embers flutter through the air
Demons littered in this dungeon
In this fiery pit of destitution
Redolent with hate
I search for a resolution
One which I may delate
Fighting off these enemies
These never ending battles
I live to fight or to be fought
Never free from my shackles
The ground gives way
Evil emerges from the depths
Seducingly - it grasps me,
As I slowly drift to death
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-06-19 11:40:49]
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Re: walking through
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:52:45 PM AEST
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I always enjoy your writes---they have such great detail, and this one was no exception. Nicely done.
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Re: walking through
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:01:44 PM AEST
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this stanza, the last..second to none bro:
"The ground gives way,
Evil emerges from the depths,
Seducingly - it grasps me,
I slowly drift to death"
beautiful gloom in all it's entirety..
suffice it to say, everything you write
is omnipotent..
awesome write bro
B
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Re: walking through
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:10:08 PM AEST
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Wow wiz, splendid poem. You are so good at this type of poem. Go, Wiz, go.
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Re: walking through
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by brew on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:09:48 PM AEST
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What the times gives for you to search............WOW.........nice job. You have some powerful writings.......!!!!!!! Again, another great write.
Brew~ |
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Re: walking through
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:00:31 PM AEST
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Wow....
This crumbled earth on which I walk
each step with apprehension,
Accepting every challenge,
Accepting all the tension
Marching alone into nothingness,
Expansive ruins to the horizon,
Embers flutter through the air,
Demons littered in this dungeon
Awesome write...loved how it all began....
Jenni |
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Re: walking through
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:56:14 PM AEST
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I felt this. I get it.
You may have posted this as "life poetry", but this write is unquestionably
dripping with darkness. Gosh I love this piece. Damn. I've heard
of the "smell of fear" before, but of hate? Bloody exceptional this was.
The imagery, the metaphors . . . the conception! Wow !!
A magnificent portrayal of the darker side of life . . .
And spoken with such clarity . . . your insight is extraordinary. Your inner
voice speaks with what some may feel are clandestine thoughts . . . and
you pour them down on paper with the most fierce audacity !!
A most magnificent write, dearest. And well worth another read, (or ten).
~Breezy
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Re: walking through
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 01:10:27 AM AEST
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Wow, this is like totally WoW. I love this fantastic piece by you dearest Paul~ One's battle within himself as voices long to free themselves. You beaut, this is the other side of life the dark one we try so hard to conceal. You have penned it so well. An outstanding write~ Totally hooked from beginning to end.
Excellent job dearest Wiz~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
sue m |
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