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life during death
Contributed by
karmen
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:39:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Close your eyes,
and try to sympathize
Picture her dying,
just across the floor lying.
Blood running from her veins,
tears bursting from all the pains.
Billions of thoughts going throught her mind,
as her time here unwinds.
Calm your nerves and take a deep breath,
this is only a glance of life during death.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-06-19 00:39:44]
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Re: life during death
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by Shnyzz on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:09:33 AM AEST
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| Why do people always ask people to comment on suicide poems? You should never ask for sympathy... help maybe... but never sympathy. It won't make you a stonger person. I too have felt this way before but it will pass and happier times will come. |
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Re: life during death
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by karmen on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 11:35:16 AM AEST
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| its not a suicide poem about me.. or anyone i know. i just get ideas and write so please dont hint at me being pathetic because i am not. i just want comments on my writing. |
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Re: life during death
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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lol. it was a good poem and i just read previous comments. maybe this Shynzz person should read some comments i make on suicide poems. someone on this site told me they really help, so that's a reason. am i right? lol. good work, i liked how you put it together and i'm glad that it's not about you! keep up the good work!!
~sprints |
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Re: life during death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:36:27 PM AEST
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| whatever it sounds like you want to kill someone no offense. |
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