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Transition
Contributed by
bittersweet315
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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it's noon
take a shower
to try to wash away my problems
cleanse my soul
in this stall of indoor rain
hypnotized by the sound
close my eyes
begin to lose my awareness
except for the rhythmical beating of the water
rushing over and encompassing my body
every drop
come out of my trance
maybe this pink bar of soap
will aid in the process
of making everything disapear
i don't want to think anymore
i just want the water
to take everything away
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2005-06-18 22:31:16]
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Re: Transition
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by LevyMetal on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 05:53:06 PM AEST
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| liked this poem. Very colorful and can relate to easily. nice job..keep up this kind of work! |
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Re: Transition
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by edwynne on
Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 09:04:59 AM AEST
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| good effort :} |
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Re: Transition
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by Jrtoews on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 04:41:41 PM AEST
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| good poem i think it should have been a little longer and expalined what u wanted washed away |
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