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Death Call
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hear the call
I look at all
And mutter goodbye
Not a single soul cries
That’s my whole life
Wrapped up in one strife
One damn long-lasting strife
I hear the call of the knife
The call of the gun
Reminding me that I’m shunned
Calling, screaming, shouting
Now I’m reaching
Some say it’s not right
But it’s my way to fight
I’m on my own
All alone
In the life where I feel shunned
With me knife and beloved gun
Both are calling to me
And I know I must leave
But gun or knife?
Which is better to end the strife?
Gun is quick and fast
Knife strong and lasts
I want the pain
I want to feel myself drain
I pick up the calling knife
I’m ending this strife
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2005-06-18 21:28:12]
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Re: Death Call
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by unluckicharmz on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:38:09 PM AEST
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| omg sum1 knos wut itz like this poem is good it agve me chills check out sum of mine and tellme if their good!!! |
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Re: Death Call
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by Wandering-Soul on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:44:10 PM AEST
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Hm... touching, yet sad in one stroke. I guess no one is alone. However, although all feel alone and uncared for (like you mentioned), there are some gifted with strength. Any with a creative soul can think above suicide and live on through their writing. It is their art their passion, and I think anyone with such a gift would agree.
Be strong and best of luck... |
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Re: Death Call
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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| this is a good write and i know exactly how you feel since i feel the same exact way |
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Re: Death Call
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by confused on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:01:09 PM AEST
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| wow this is really good!*claps* good job |
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Re: Death Call
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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i do not recommend the knife. it doesnt have the effect you think it will. sure the pain is there but it wont end it. cause more it will... but addicting it becomes... so much so that you do not want to end it... although i do not recommend the gun either. too easy.
i recommend to continue living... but that is a choice i cannot make for you. love you i do... i wish i could help take away some of your pain...
much love,
jennie* |
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Re: Death Call
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:26:02 PM AEST
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| Wow, very sad. I feel for you. I'm sorry you feel that way. Very powerful write. |
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