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i just dont see the point
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:52:34 PM in AEST
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im thinkin i should just give up
i just dont see the point
in tryin to fool myself that ill ever be good enough
im think maybe im at my end
since i cant see down the road anymore
its all a fog, and im afraid maybe just another dead end
im thinkin i should just stop tryin
ill only fail again anyways
to this day i havent done anything right
im thinkin i should just give up
but im too much of a whimp
ill just end up screwin that up to
just like everythin elces ive done
my suicide is another thing ill abandon
but i realy just dont see the point in anything anymore
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Re: i just dont see the point
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by unluckicharmz on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:57:17 PM AEST
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| good i like it ive felt like this before check out some of my poetry it may help ya some feel free to comment |
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Re: i just dont see the point
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:03:00 PM AEST
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great write! i just have to say that a lot feel like this. i know it hurts and it's hard to fight the urge to be suicidal. but we all have to try anyways. and i see what you are good at. read what you just wrote ^^^. we all are good at something.... we just have to find that something. and don't worry, i'm here looking for my something, too. realize that you are not alone and that others care for you!! keep up the good work!!
Hope it all works out ok!!!
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Re: i just dont see the point
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:12:35 PM AEST
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| I have felt this way plenty and still do sometimes when i stop pretending that i'm fine. I just try to think positivie and it sucks b/c it doesn't work but there has to be somethng good out there for me and the same for you. Good luck and hope that everything gets better. |
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Re: i just dont see the point
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:30:23 PM AEST
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| Good write but don’t think you’ll mess up suicide you need to think that you have to much pride to take your life and admit defeat. Take care my friend and keep releasing your pain and emotion threw your writes they are a pleasure to read when I have time. Sorry its been so long but things get busy over here in Iraq. Talk to you later and keep up the writes….Steve |
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