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Haunted House
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Nestling in a hill of green
Haunted chalet, can be seen
Dark and empty, so forlorn
Quietly cold, in air so warm
It sits so lonely and so worn
A house that is a ghostly home
Can you hear them whispering?
Haunting voices, softly sing
Waiting for their tale to tell
Stories that they know so well
Lost and lonely, hope all gone
Please, please help us, goes the song
They were once like you and me
Now they wait to be set free
House can be a home once more
Come now, let's knock at the door
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-18 17:50:04]
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Re: Haunted House
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:28:47 PM AEST
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this poem realy got 2 me, i read it slower as i got into it sad yet deeply charged with emotions, nice write . . .
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Re: Haunted House
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:51:24 PM AEST
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I felt like a little kid reading this..
It got so mischievous in the end there..
(creeping up to that old spooky house on a dare
with my friends and whatnot..lol)
captivating write..
b |
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Re: Haunted House
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by Amazon on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 07:50:48 PM AEST
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| at the end of this one i sorta felt sorry for the ghosts, its almost like there just waiting for someone to come live in there house again |
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