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letting go
Contributed by
razorbladesangel45
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Letting go of everything
i slip into darkness
caused by loss of blood
all the pain in my life consumes me
but only for a moment
everything stops around
time is standing still
i hover in infinity
waiting for my fall
gravitysets in again
i dive into the blackness
the cool air flows past my face
i no longer fear my end
i long for it, i embrace it
finally i hit the ground
but i feel no pain
instead i feel deaths black kiss
its cold apon my lips
i look down and see my lifeless body
then float into infity
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2005-06-18 15:57:56]
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Re: letting go
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by Gunda on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:19:12 PM AEST
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A amazingly good poetry. Gess it is like this we think the death will be. You made the death look good and happy, I know how that dream are like. But after watching a friend try this over and over again, and cry out loud for help. I don`t longer think this is rigth.
But no matter how the deat will be when it once come, this was a good poetry. And even though I am not sure I have commented on your poems before I have read that and I like them all! |
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Re: letting go
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:23:57 PM AEST
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great write!! and i wish for death and want it to come soon, too. but, suicide is not the answer. and i don't want to sound like a damned conselor... so i appologize. but, no matter what, we have to be strong and fight life back. we have to fight the will to be suicidal. it's easy to give in, but fighting back proves that you are truly strong! I hope it all works out for you!!
~sprints
p.s. Keep up the great work!! |
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