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Death Quiver
Contributed by
syloss
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:53:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My heart begins to twist and spasm,
The little things that I used to adore,
The closer that we sit, the farther the chasm,
Its time is over; I am beginning to bore
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2005-06-18 15:53:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death Quiver
(User Rating: 1 ) by Astralbermudian on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 06:27:58 AM AEST (User
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^^ I like this. It's short and sweet, easily understandable but still mysterious, and the title is cool! 5 from me. |
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Re: Death Quiver
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnOreo on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:34:43 PM AEST (User
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Not bad but very short
-anoreo |
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