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Farewell Until Next Dawn
Contributed by
HoPeFuLtKn
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:39:14 PM in AEST
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Dancing in the sunshine fields of flowers,
Feeling on top of the world with inhuman powers.
Until that cloud up above came along the path,
Evil swept down, taking the child in its wrath.
The rain poured over the flowers of all kinds,
Leaving that small girls heart in many binds.
Leerings from the storm swooped down on her that day,
The field that once blossomed is now here she will forever lay.
Shrieks from within her dying soul,
Took her heart--that one huge toll.
The pigtail, blue-eyed child is now gone,
Farewell beautiful flowers, until next dawn.
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HoPeFuLtKn
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2005-06-18 15:39:14]
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Re: Farewell Until Next Dawn
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:08:10 PM AEST
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Awesome, such a beautiful piece. As always
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Re: Farewell Until Next Dawn
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
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| Another great one...you're right at some point there is always someone raining on your parade. Good write. |
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