|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lost My Light
Contributed by
Random
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:58:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
as the light fades today
i wish your memory would run away
so i could have a thought without you face
so i could forget your taste
once you were my light
but not tonight
not tonight
never again in my eyes will you be burning bright
another day ends with no resolution
as you lay next to me
the dark hides your hate
almost gives you an innocent glow
but its all for show
goodnight my little dying light
Copyright ©
Random
... [
2005-06-17 23:58:10]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lost My Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:12:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I think it could use alittle help... I can understand it alittle but on the other hand some of it doesn't make sence to me..Keep trying !!! |
|
|
Re: Lost My Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:04:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| What she ^ said. |
|
|
Re: Lost My Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by brokenbutterfly on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:31:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really rather liked this poem... especially the last line. It's a good write....
nicole |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
