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DIAL 1-800-DADDY
Contributed by
freda_burrel
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i need to talk to daddy,
he isnt here right now.
i have to ask some questions,
but i really dont know how.
why isnt my daddy standing here?
right here next to me.
why does he always cry a lot,?
when he shouldnt be
he stands afar,
and looks my way.
when mama comes out,
he runs away.
why does he always hide,
from me?
when i come out to play.
i havent seen my daddy yet,
he isnt here today.
so can i call my daddy?
so i can ask him why.?
why he doesnt come here no more?
and , why did he always cry?
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Re: DIAL 1-800-DADDY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sherah on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:55:42 PM AEST (User
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Very Nice Job...... Great Poem!! |
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Re: DIAL 1-800-DADDY
(User Rating: 1 ) by JustAGirl001 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:11:18 PM AEST (User
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Very well-written poem. So much said in such a small poem. Excellent job. |
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