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Drowning
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You stand in the window and look down below,
your face shining with the moonlight's glow.
I look at you, you look at me,
and then I know it can never be.
I don't what I did, or how to make it right,
but I'm drowning in the empty of this deep, dark night.
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2005-06-17 23:38:05]
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Re: Drowning
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:32:34 AM AEST
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yeah i get it
its happend to me
its a bit personal |
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Re: Drowning
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 08:15:48 PM AEST
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awwww
beautiful write and i liek it
mooocha cha *hugs*
~Kortnie~ |
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