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Question.
Contributed by
BlindRomantic
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:35:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If you can’t fall out of love
Then where does it go?
So intense one day
Then moving so slow.
You hold me different
Like it’s the last time
For us to stay together
Would just be a crime.
You talk to me slower
Because every last word counts
This is the end,
But to what do I amount?
You’ve taught me to love
You gave and took all
I put everything out there
Without readying myself to fall.
I thought you had caught me
When I took that leap,
But it was only a step
Now it’s much more steep.
You always said you loved me
And that all you spoke was true
Now without your love
I’m not sure what I will do.
I was sure this would last
For the rest of my life
Now my heart is broken
And I’m considering the knife.
Just give us one more chance
We can work together and strive
We can continue with each other
And keep our love alive.
I need someone to save me
Take me away from all this pain,
I know I created it -
All love will end in hate.
Copyright ©
BlindRomantic
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2005-06-17 22:35:19]
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Re: Question.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:42:00 PM AEST
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| NIce Poem !! |
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Re: Question.
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by foxfire44 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:55:22 PM AEST
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| you did a very nice job I likes the poem alot sometimes pain can put an gdge to our writing |
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