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The Difference Between Flying And Falling
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:31:27 PM in AEST
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It felt as if I were spinning,
spiraling from the sun;
It felt as if I were dying
and for that moment, I had won.
Well we were running,
thinking that nothing was real;
And I was noticing nothing,
but I could feel you on my heels.
We kept on flying,
willing the moment to decide for us;
We kept on trying
to place our trust
It was then that visions clouded.
But we kept on flying;
It was then that I heard my scream aloud.
But we kept on falling.
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2005-06-17 22:31:27]
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Re: The Difference Between Flying And Falling
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by Sherah on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:18:11 PM AEST
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It's a really good poem... Good luck in your writing....
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Re: The Difference Between Flying And Falling
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:52:04 AM AEST
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There's nuthing wrong with this masterpeice as it teaches but so beautifully creative writing.
huggs,
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Re: The Difference Between Flying And Falling
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by bernard on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 11:07:55 AM AEST
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| Nice write keep them coming top marks from bernard |
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