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Nipple Fire Series
Contributed by
DarylLew151
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
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*Lonely, So lonely. I've felt this way ever since it happened. It has been so long since I've last had the feeling. I don't want to live without the warmth and comfort that I had once known. So, God if that’s your real name, I leave you with this one question... Why can I no longer shoot fire from my nipples?
*The flame that had once been the only thing that could quench my thirst for life is gone, I beg for its return but I am only left with abandonment. My nipples yearn for the flame.
*Darkness completely engulfs the soul when your limitations become a realization. Your only escape is to seek a Haven. However one is taken off limits to all. Only I may shoot flames from my nipples.
*Gone, all gone. I thought I had everything that I wanted in life but now I'm left with nothing. As hard as it came it leaves effortlessly.
*Another night alone filled with anguish and torment. I Must Suffer alone for no one else could ever feel the same as I. To have had more than one could ever crave in one's lifetime stripped away leaving me cold and broken, not even a shadow of my former self remains. To sit up and wait for its return is futile yet it is the only hope I have left in this world. So Until The Extinguished Flame Rekindles Or Until I Pass From This Realm To Another I Will Sit Here Alone Watching And Waiting.
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2003-01-06 04:20:00]
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Re: Nipple Fire Series
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by OreO on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 08:43:01 AM AEST
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Hmm, well it's definately different...that's for sure...You know i am a very spiritual person and i don't even think i can receive the depth of this poem....thanks for sharing it my friend this one is very unique.....You truly do have a style all of your own...
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Re: Nipple Fire Series
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 11:17:33 AM AEST
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| all i can say is okay? you have an interesting style |
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Re: Nipple Fire Series
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 06:54:42 PM AEST
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i really like this poem, its very good. some parts i could understand quite easily and others leave me thinking. I am one of the epople who tell you to get it published. i think ilike your work becuse in a way it reminds me of my own, its different and really unique..
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