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Waiting for you......
Contributed by
OnAngelswings
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:12:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A childish spirit, this one of mine-
Never giving up on a fairytale love,
One of deepest devotion in an instant…
Such of passionate kisses and moonlight
That transcends even the time we know-
I feel you there just beyond my hearts glow,
My prince with eyes of ambered hue…
Steal a glance and light this heart,
Let me know you have finally advanced
Through the thicket of space that separates us.
Please, just love me as I am –
Change not the softness of my soul,
Nor the gentle nature that is me.
Desire the intoxication of my caress
And the taste of my lips on your own…
Know there is no other such as I
Within the fragments our lifetimes span.
Be the best friend I shall ever know
And let us speak a language ours alone,
Come love, make my dreams come true
For here I am, waiting for you…
Copyright ©
OnAngelswings
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2005-06-17 22:12:20]
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Re: Waiting for you......
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:18:59 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a masterpeice.
U speak with great wisdom.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Waiting for you......
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:54:33 PM AEST
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Lovely sentiments indeed...we all are desiring to find a love like that.
Well done, great flow and use of powerful words.
I like it. |
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Re: Waiting for you......
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by foxfire44 on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:05:49 PM AEST
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| you show the passion in your writing and heart felt love this is very good ....nice poem |
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Re: Waiting for you......
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:34:55 AM AEST
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This poem is as gentle as the pedal of a flower and twice as beautiful, a real experience 2 the scences as i was
reading it, lovely peice of writting . . .
Ben |
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Re: Waiting for you......
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:11:32 PM AEST
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| You are only wrong about being wrong. We are what is written above but you are letting me slip away...........M |
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