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Ocean Effects
Contributed by
foxfire44
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:04:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Look at the ocean waves rolling in
Thundering to tell me where life begins
Every wave is another new day
Footsteps of time are being washed away
Sunshine glistens on the waters edge
Like the shinning feathers of an angles head
High in the sky a bird soars so free
Floating and gliding I wish it were me
All this I can see as I walk on the Shore
My mind relaxes, my bodies not sore
The rapture of it all calms me, helps me to restore
Yet just another set of footstep I will be once more
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foxfire44
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2005-06-17 21:04:26]
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Re: Ocean Effects
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this!! (tho' it could use some editing)
Great imagery here..
Welcome to YPDC..
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Re: Ocean Effects
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by Sherah on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:33:52 PM AEST
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| Great Poem!! Keep up the great work !!! |
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Re: Ocean Effects
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
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This is lovely. I used to live on the coast of Texas and would go to the beach early in the mornings and walk in the foam at the waters edge. I loved to see the sunrise and find the beautiful shells that had tumbled in overnight. The beautiful sandollar with it religious symbols. This brought back lovely memories. Thank you.
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Re: Ocean Effects
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:02:27 AM AEST
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This is lovely. I used to live on the coast of Texas and would go to the beach early in the mornings and walk in the foam at the waters edge. I loved to see the sunrise and find the beautiful shells that had tumbled in overnight. The beautiful sandollar with it religious symbols. This brought back lovely memories. Thank you.
Rita |
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