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Silence In The Noise
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:44:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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The sound behind the noise
A hushed quiet permeates the place
An interlude between time and space
A chill runs down your spine
And you actually seek to find
You sense a presence around
But no tangible evidence can be found
From where does the experience originate
An almost imperceptible touch we sense
Yet an unidentifiable source
Akin to whispering in the wind
A soft voice calls to you
Suffice it to say, in your mind
It orchestrates a soft refrain of some kind
Even in a crowded atmoshpere, the silence is heard
We are reached through a different dimension
A subliminal contact is received
Only a subtle inclination is perceived
A feeling is unleashed within
And the message is conceived
Do we acknowledge the voice within
How do we interpret this experience
It has certainly triggered contemplation
Somewhere in our inner realm,
There is an explanation
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-06-17 20:44:04]
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Re: Silence In The Noise
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:04:29 AM AEST
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Very good write.
They've been amonst us thru out time.
Awesome.
huggs,
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Re: Silence In The Noise
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:58:34 AM AEST
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| This is a lovely piece of work.I can relate to the feeling.Well done |
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Re: Silence In The Noise
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:57:07 AM AEST
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Well done Will!! This write is so descriptive it's more like a mini story. I really enjoyed reading this...Keep up the great writes!
Scorp. |
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Re: Silence In The Noise
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:50:46 AM AEST
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| Very good. You have a very vivid mind. Good write. |
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Re: Silence In The Noise
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:37:07 PM AEST
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| =], loved it. especially the ending line. i really was drawn to this because of the title, and your piece certainly does back up such a wonderful title. |
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