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everything you want me to be

Contributed by saved_by_the_x on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



the thing i want
is not a future
but a death trap
that i have fellen in to

everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you

sometimes i am strong but
everything you want me to be
is not what i see
causethere is a blindness

not always to the naked eye
but to a covered herat
that has a hole
with no cure other than love

everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you

it stay hidden to the outside
but the emotions
within cry for salvation
in my lord jesus christ

now i think i have been
everything you want me to be
now i see the light
from the the black

everything you want
me to be
is not what my
mind sees within you

~ I cryed out for salvation in my lord jesus christ on nov-20-04~




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Re: everything you want me to be (User Rating: 1 )
by saved_by_the_x on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:09:40 PM AEST
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i hope some1 comes
in my poem i just started
on this web and no one
has made a comment
on none of mine so plz
tell me if i am good or if
they are just bad and i
need to stop tell me the
truth it will not hurt my
feeling i have had
people say worst well
thanks i am a nerd
cause i posted on my
own poem but i want
some 1 to tell me if
they are good


Re: everything you want me to be (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:05:16 PM AEST
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You are very lucky to found our Lord! Congradulations!!!!!!I look forward to more of your poems...You're always in my prayers....Shari :)


Re: everything you want me to be (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:48:52 AM AEST
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i think your poems are beautiful.
i to get frustrated when i spend a lot of time on a poem and no one comments. the pen is a good way to let out frustration as well as just every day life.
keep it up i will read!

nat




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