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Quick! Be Perfect!
Contributed by
xXcrossedXx
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 02:29:13 PM in AEST
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Miss Ana strives perfection
And what she strives she'll get.
You'll be obsessed like her
You'll be addicted, this I'll bet.
She sets an image in your mind
And this you must become,
Pretty soon you'll be weak and frail
Your starvation will be numbed.
Miss Ana wants perfection
And this you must supply.
Because Miss Ana gets what she wants
Even if it means you die.
And I'm sorry, but thats just the way she is,
Miss Ana needs perfection, and this you must give.
So give it to her fast, before she gets too far,
Cause nothing is Perfect
And she won't stop until you are.
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by Dreama on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:10:22 PM AEST
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sad topic but well put! i liked the rhyming
keep writing!! P |
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:33:25 PM AEST
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This is a very well written write about an often secretive subject. Well done Amanda. I sure hope you don't struggle with this disease....Take Care.
Scorp. |
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:58:19 PM AEST
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| you make miss ana sound so evil. it's awesome, keep it up amanda. you've got uncomparable talent. |
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:17:54 AM AEST
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Anyone with or who has an eating disorder would do well to read this, admittingly one poem's not going to change things for them but it might set them on the path to right thinking.
It is such a shame that people will virtually kill themselves in the pursuit of beauty, the song beautiful by christine agullara sprang to mind as i read this.
You have put across a great message, or a warning if you like.
Excellent work.
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 11:47:24 AM AEST
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| You've got a lot to say about the theme of perfection, and the more I read about it in your writes, the more I understand your point of view on the situation. Ana is someone I've heard of just recently, and it's really sad to know that people can find reasons to believe in "her." As for the poem specifically, the subject matter wasnt necessarily relatable for me, but that doesnt take away from reading it. You had a lot of strong lines that were made better with your rhymes and you just had so much to say and didn't go off on a rant, because it was all about the same point. It all tied in, and that was a great element. Well done. |
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:44:05 PM AEST
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| i loved the topic, the message, and how you portrayed it. hopefully people would rather be more imperfect in her eyes, than their own. |
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Re: Quick! Be Perfect!
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by perfection on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:11:52 AM AEST
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I really liked it, and i personally know that the poem is pretty much the way everyone talks about Ana.
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