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Who is She?
Contributed by
neoo507
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:51:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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dream
it may seem
but I think she''s real
maybe she''s out there waiting
right at the front door
I see her and want more
but she disapears
that''s my only fears
Who is she
Somebody wake me, I don''t want to suffer anymore
What if someone takes her
and makes her theres
that mysterious girl
looks better than a chocalate swirl
I wake up at night and wonder who is she?
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2005-06-17 13:51:39]
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Re: Who is She?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:06:41 PM AEST
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Very mysterious I think you could have played around with it a little more though.
Nice write, keep it up
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Re: Who is She?
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:12:51 PM AEST
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