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Night Tears
Contributed by
HoPeFuLtKn
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:30:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A place far away, somewhere she escapes to each night,
Evil leerings that show her blue eyes horrid fright.
Demons from hell terrorize her mind each sleeping hour,
Seeming so tall and powerful, they truly do tower.
She screams so loud, yet no one seems to hear,
For only that girl can see the things of her fear.
Each waking hour leaves the childs eyes full of tears,
From the creatures, those hell birds, and all of their leers.
That childs heart was pounding of sorrow,
Trying not to breath, afraid and in spite of tomorrow.
When devils terrorize her, she knows she is bound,
The girl who cries tears, knowing she will never be found.
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HoPeFuLtKn
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2005-06-17 12:30:49]
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Re: Night Tears
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:36:33 PM AEST
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Another awesome post by you, i must say i am very impressed with the quality in your first posts, Great Job again,
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Re: Night Tears
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:17:37 PM AEST
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This s so sad...
I am going to agree with Clark again, I am very impressed by your poems so far.
I have not seem one I don't like yet.
These are really good.
Keep it up, I'll keep reading.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Night Tears
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:21:47 PM AEST
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Wow. This is great! So much meaning wonderful write!
--amanda-- |
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