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Goodbye Moon
Contributed by
HoPeFuLtKn
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:22:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She dances in moonlight, until the bright tomorrow,
Forgetting her past, her present, and all of its sorrow.
The gleaming light, and the swift pitter patter,
As suddenly as it started, it all ends with a shatter.
The child awakens to the rain surrounding her,
Dreams of yesterday make her life, only more unsure.
Her life is controlled by the deamons she calls "It",
To think about them makes her heart throw a fit.
She knows not whats planned, for her upcoming days,
Not to care, just going back to deamworld where she lays.
Until tomorrow she bids her sad goodbye to the moon,
Hoping, as she cries, to again, see it soon.
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HoPeFuLtKn
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2005-06-17 12:22:50]
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Re: Goodbye Moon
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:33:16 PM AEST
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Very good post, amazing write, i really like how it id dark and sorrowful, but still a glimpse of light in it, Very well done, and welcome to YPDC
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Re: Goodbye Moon
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:19:46 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
I love this!
*is obsessed with the moon*
This is a stunning poem, and I can relate to it a lot. Especially that last stanza.
Stnning poems,
Great write,
Phil xxx
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Re: Goodbye Moon
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by justmeallicanbe on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:44:56 PM AEST
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| Very Good. Although dark and dreary there may be light at the end of the tunnel. Very Very Good. Heidi~ |
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