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Engaging
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:06:53 PM in AEST
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The tide is turning
winds of change abound
This house no longer a home
a trek so daunting...
That ring of trust---broken
cause and effect unknown
No longer a comfort
no longer AFRAID
Embark on a mission
strength and comfort in tow
Guilty pleasures exposed
Wanted by some...
needed by none.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-17 12:06:53]
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Re: Engaging
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:12:54 PM AEST
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Even if this isnt the norm style from you it i still very unique and amazing in the sense of how it flows..Very good job Scorp ; ]
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Re: Engaging
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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Youch Scorp.
I like this. It seems like a random collection of thoughts, but it also seems more. (I know that doesn't make sense. lol)
The last two lines are really sad though. Powerful too, they hit me hard.
Great write hun,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Engaging
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:11:44 PM AEST
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Wow, this is great. I love it. Sad and touching at the same time. Sounds like winds of change are a blowing.
Rita |
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Re: Engaging
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:13:02 PM AEST
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A truly deep and stirring poem scorp, your
comming through loud an clear, a nice write
never the less, the poet's heart is reaching
out to be heard . . .
Ben |
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Re: Engaging
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:28:09 PM AEST
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I love the.. "off the beaten path" style scorp..
you leave me wanting more with each and every write..
as always..
b
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Re: Engaging
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:42:32 AM AEST
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| Gotta agree with Man_On_High on this one Scorp. Once again you leave us wanting more. You are much too humble and I still believe you're one of the best here. Great job!!! Not that I don't like the other lines but "Guilty pleasures exposed"....too cool!!!! And yes I gave it a five because once again, life is unjust, and there is not a higher score to give. Definitely a 5+++++++++++++++++++, definitely a 5+++++++++++++++++++ plusser :) |
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Re: Engaging
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:32:42 AM AEST
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The poem is very engaging; and to me, seems to depict a person ready to move on in life after a trust is broken.
Well done, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Engaging
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:41:11 PM AEST
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Filled with many emotions. Loved the way you expressed them loud and clear.
Terrific
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Engaging
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:53:11 PM AEST
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| I agree, this one was good (like most of your work) it just seemed like it was missing something. It seemed like it ended without being finished. Good job though! |
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Re: Engaging
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:20:33 PM AEST
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That last line!!! :( That last line...really drives it home.
Signed,
Back Burner |
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