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negative
Contributed by
seanfromohio
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Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:12:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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i'm sitting in class thinking i'll never pass this test
i think i'll fail even if i try my best
sometimes in life i only get one shot
but i think it's gonna come to a loss
i'm looking forward to be wealthy and rich
but everyday i know i'll never make it
because i know i'm not
i'll never get a good job
when people like me i always think they hate me
there's this girl and she seems to like me
but i think inside that she'll always hate my guts
i feel so bad i don't even want to be loved
i need someone to talk to
someone who knows what to do
with my emotions and depression
but mostly it's obsession
everything i think makes no sense
the things i dream are all pretend
my good thoughts are coming to an end
i'm always thinging negative
i'm feeeling down on myslef
and feeling worried and obsessed
about the things that don't exist
abd what's gonna happen next
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2005-06-17 11:12:53]
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Re: negative
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by helianthus on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:33:14 AM AEST
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| Excellent thought process. Note: preview/spellcheck before ya post. I like no caps, no real structure, no forced rhyme. Good job! This is so true about the way a lot of people think. I write negative and dark but I am pretty positive for the most part. Poetry is my therapy. Thank you for sharing. I'll be watching you. You have a new critic. |
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Re: negative
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:56:24 AM AEST
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I agree with the last person. You need to spell check.
Hmmm... I can see how this hurts. School and growing up can be very hard. Many people go through this.
All I can say is that as you get older you will understand.
Good write,
Phil xxx |
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