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I wonder
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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don't remember your faces
wonder on what basis
I was born for
I was sold for
now as fathers' day approaches
I am so very knackered
of imagining what happens over there
my present state so right across from yours
different culture
different structure
of life
to strive
stuck in this sad place
I wonder
if you wonder
how I'm doing
I wonder if we even speak the same language now
I wonder if I've ever walked pass you
and you pass me
unbeknowing that we're blood-related
so very slanted
of this world
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2005-06-17 09:24:05]
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Re: I wonder
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:26:18 AM AEST
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very moving. what does not kill us will make us stronger. and everything happens for a reason. what you have now may be better then what they can give you.
good write.
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Re: I wonder
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by mysonnet on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:21:01 AM AEST
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beautiful poem la jx..
hahaaa...
nag so much.. |
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